Talk:Raye Penber


 * There's also a big mistake to be noticed in the animé version: once Penber holds the paper sheets from the Death Note, as he writes the names of his fellow detectives on them, he didn't see the Shikigami former owner (Ryuk) and therefore never received the rules from him, just like the same rules command (as the audience was told from the episode with the drug-addict thief that tried to kidnap the bus, an saw Ryuk immediately after touching a piece of paper from the Death Note; or when Ryuk explained to Light before that, that he should be careful with the Death Note, because if his family touched it they would be able to see the Shinigami as well). Such detail was very upsetting for the fans because of its inconsistency, which opposes to the claim of the so called "high elaborated" congruence of the whole Death Note story.

This passage is confusing at parts, as well as holding a biased tone due to a lack of possible explanations. I was unaware that this detail was "very upsetting" to fans for "inconsistency," and I am a fan of Death Note, myself. Is there someone who can correct this in such a way to do it justice? --れび (talk to Lavi!) 01:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)