Thread:KylaraE/@comment-20644-20170831165250/@comment-23771723-20170901062758

Amanda, if the video is here to stay, please make the following initial corrections to the L (character) video:
 * "dead set" - poor word choice, please rephrase.
 * "serial killer" - Kira is a mass murderer, not a serial killer, please correct.
 * Frame at 00:21 - L wasn't mentored by Watari, please correct.
 * 00:36 - Frame goes by too quickly to read. Pausing the video makes it blurry, so that isn't an option. Please correct timing.
 * 00:36 - Light didn't give the Death Note to Ryuk, he buried it and gave up ownership. Please correct.
 * 01:02 - Light "is" Kira, not "was" Kira, please use present tense.
 * 01:16 - Again, Light "is" Kira, please use present tense.
 * 01:20 - Is that an exclamation point at the end of the sentence? It's blurry.

I will be able to look at the video more closely tomorrow night or Saturday.

Additionally, the video first autoplayed with sound on, so it seems the glitches have not been worked out. Please advise on the timeframe we can expect the existing issues to be addressed.

I continue to look forward to your responses.